I found this poem on the desk top I love it! I am so proud of her she is such an awesome writer.
The Rain Dance By laurel Jefferies
The clear droplets pour down around me
Steam rises as it hits the ground
A smell so profound
It washes the world clean
The cool rain falls around me
Wetting me to the core
I look up and move my arms
I spin then dip close to the ground
Water gathers around my feet
I leap and it splashes my face
The water falls back around me
6 comments:
Laurel ROCKS!! Tell her hi for me!
I will...isn't she awesome?
If only I was as great of a writer at her age... One diference was there were very few computers when I was in school and I never really learned to type. (boy does that date me... my dad had a TRS 80) No one could read my writing b/c I am lefthanded.
I am a much better typer now even if I don't use the right fingers. :)
See you next week Michelle
wow.... that was totally cool. Lolo, you should so write more. It's beautiful little sis!
Mom! How could you! Just kidding I love you. :)
Thank you Paulette and Shanna. I wasn't done with it though. I just wanted to try my hand at some poetry. It was raining the day I wrote it, and I ALWAYS get awesome inspiration when it rains. In fact I am at my best when it rains. :)
Laurel
Beautiful poem, great imagery.
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