That I have switched DD2 Foxproof and DD3 Awaiting. In the process of plot revision I realized that Foxproof happened too soon, and Awaiting needed to happen before any reader knew much about Dalton T. Fox. So i changed the order of the books and then realized that Awaiting which centers around Lyris Standing needed to be from her POV, so not only did I change the order but the POV of DD2. I was a little surprised but pleased with the changes. It will be a good thing, I know it in my gut, and if living with Noble in my head for so long has taught me anything, it is to trust your gut.
I have also fleshed out the spiritual side of the yoga that Noble uses in his world and changed some of the names and created my own Center Points (chakras).
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I'm confused . . .
This sounds really cool.
Thanks for joining the BIAM challenge -- it's going to be great!
Shanna, it used to go Dominion Day, Foxproof, Awaiting, Prophecy Rising, Arrival, Destined and The Guardian War. Now it goes Dominion Day which is Noble's story and from his point of view, then then Awaiting which is the continuation of Dominion Day, but is about Lyris so I changed it to her POV. Then Foxproof which is Dalton's story from his POV. Then the rest of the story which begins with Prophecy Rising which begins after a ten year time jump and is about Nobles family which now Dalton is a part. hope that makes it as clear as mud. Call me someitme and we'll talk!
Michelle
I hope it works out for you mom. I think that it is a great idea.
Love you mom
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